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Financial Terrorism? - Cramer's Stop Trading! (9/18/08)

Let's get a life. "Financial terrorism"? How childish. Cramer's been watching too many sci-fi TV programs that are meant solely for 6-10 year-olds.

Bank Stocks at 52-Week Highs

CLH...try what's, not whats. Mistakes like that keep readers from taking you seriously.

The Financials, the Automakers, and the Call That Cramer and All of CNBC Got Wrong

Brandon...its bottoms, NOT it's bottoms. It's= IT IS. Is that what you want to write...it is bottoms? That's retarded. Learn that it's means IT IS. Period.

The Financials, the Automakers, and the Call That Cramer and All of CNBC Got Wrong

try...per share, respectively. Comma before respectively!

The Long and Short of It - Cramer's Mad Money (9/18/08)

...and Cramer suggests that we sell this morning. Wow! Great timing. I'm glad I've relied on myself for advice. And Kath H. is correct; stop promoting housing stocks. Their CEOs are desperate for free air space; they can't afford to pay for airtime.

Taking Profits in TWM, Adding to Barclays

BCS will come back...and come back strong. At present levels, it presents a mouth-watering bargain.

What B of A Gets by Passing on Lehman & Gobbling Up Merrill

A well-conceived analysis, plain and simple...and the words roll out like whipping cream.

The Harder They Fall - Cramer's Mad Money (9/15/08)

Actually, anyone who watches the Cramer comedy hour is about as secure financially as AIG.

Market Skepticism About BofA / Merrill Deal

I can't wait to find out if Shedlock's predicted death knoll for the Bac/Mer merger is reversed by the author come Wednesday morning. After all, basically his entire "analysis" became hogwash in less than 24 hours.

JP Morgan: Buyer's Remorse on Bear Stearns

Much ado about nothing.

An Optimist Looks at the Market

Your writing "style" leaves much to be desired. Start the improvement process by dumping such dead words as "there " (with linking verbs is, are, was, were, to be) and "thing." What is a "thing"? Also, use hyphens with multi-word adjecetives, for example, "Once-in-a-lifetime opportunity."
In addition, write in complete sentences, not fragments, e.g., "Up around 10%..."in no way constitutes a complete sentence.

Go for the Gold

Your "writing style" needs dramatic improvement, starting with a strengthening vocabulary. Start by eliminating the dead expressions starting with there -- "there is," "there are," etc., and by beginning sentences with nouns, not the lifeless, vague "it."

An Optimist Looks at the Market

OPTIMISM: A cheerful frame of mind that enables a tea kettle to sing, even though it's in hot water up to its nose.

Anonymous

BAC's Ken Lewis Mulls Another Deal as Lehman Reaches Brink

Don Super....try DOESN'T, not doesnt. Apostrophes do not bite, despite what your mother might have told you.

Citibank - On Guard! - Cramer's Stop Trading! (9/12/08)

The vast majority of people who patronize Sears and KMart walk to the malls; they sold their vehicles, using the proceeds to keep from becoming delinquent on their mortgage payments.