Your writing "style" leaves much to be desired. Start the improvement process by dumping such dead words as "there " (with linking verbs is, are, was, were, to be) and "thing." What is a "thing"? Also, use hyphens with multi-word adjecetives, for example, "Once-in-a-lifetime opportunity." In addition, write in complete sentences, not fragments, e.g., "Up around 10%..."in no way constitutes a complete sentence.
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JPM had said racked up...Confusing; word omitted. Edit your copy so as not to detract from your credibility. The financials are rallyling DESPITE THE FACT THAT...WORDY; try rallying, EVEN THOUGH..... Two words are better than one; avoid wordiness.
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In addition, write in complete sentences, not fragments, e.g., "Up around 10%..."in no way constitutes a complete sentence.
An Optimist Looks at the Market [View article]
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The financials are rallyling DESPITE THE FACT THAT...WORDY; try rallying, EVEN THOUGH.....
Two words are better than one; avoid wordiness.
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