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  • To the Banking Industry Victors Go the Spoils [View article]
    Capitalize the word "Internet." That's common knowledge.
    Oct 19 19:39 pm |Rating: 0 -1 |Link to Comment
  • To the Banking Industry Victors Go the Spoils [View article]
    Used WHAT to create his vast fortune? And what's with all the its at the beginning of sentences? It is one of those hastily used words that lacks meaning if the reader cannot determine the antecedent of "it." Start sentences with nouns, followed by verbs, then objects. That's grade-school
    learnling that you apparently choose to ignore. Overdependence on pronouns makes your writing void for vagueness.
    Oct 19 19:38 pm |Rating: 0 0 |Link to Comment
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